Friday, 25 August 2017


every time I walk past a spider my spine shivers. I think about what they look like and scream inside. I wonder what they look like. they look small but they really are big if you are small.

I have this fear causing my spine to shiver brrr. I feel like running away but I don't. my legs freeze. I stand there. my heart beats like I finished cross country
I am afraid of spiders.


  1. Hi Ben here from Te Waka Ako in Waikowhai Primary School. I also have a fear of spiders too, but not exactly that scared. I like how you compared cross country with your writing. Maybe next time try and put in some capital letters and some punctuation. If you want to visit my blog it is;

  2. thank you Ben for commenting on my spiders and i am horrified of spiders

    bye Ben